Tuesday 1 March 2011

Rough Cut -- Feedback (57-U2)

       There are many different interesting shots but the scene the shots are showing drag on a bit and could use a bit more variety or action.
We couldn’t really tell what genre it was but as an opening sequence it really sets the scene for what the audience should expect for the rest of the film.
       There was so much ambient noise and some clips were louder than others which doesn’t show consistency. When the gate shuts it makes the audience jump but it could close quietly showing that the person who took the girl is quiet and doesn’t want to be seen? Also the swing shot after the gate is silent to be given a shot with loud ambient noise.
       There isn’t really any transition between the shots it just goes straight from one to the other.
       We really liked when the sings looked double, it was a really good effect and also when the girl drops the bear. The scenes leading up to this though drags on and we felt a bit board. 

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