Feedback on Final Thriller Project

Thriller Feedback

Sound

• Eerie music
• Breathing/panting made the dream realistic 
• Possible change of sound throughout dream
• Becomes monotonous after a while
• Scream was done well - loud

Mise - en - Scene

• Props - teddy-bear showed she was young
• Location - playground related to film 
• Next to motor-way made it less dramatic
• Costume - little girl costume looked too old 
• Costume in bed made it realistic

Editing 

• Good use of fading in and out
• Vignette effect created good sense of a dream
• When swing shook created a sense of drama
• Credits went well with sequence and genre 

Camerawork

• Good choice of shots 
• Seeing objects understand the location
• Close-ups used well
• POV created a sense that he was in a dream
• You don't see her face - creates questions

Best point

• Good editing created a real sense of a dream
• Ending of sequence created questions

Improvements 

• He is asleep in daylight
• Traffic - took away 'spookiness'
• Sounds become a bit boring as the tune goes on through whole film.