Changes made due to feedback (Rough Cut 2)

      After the feedback we were given, we made some minor changes to our work to conform to the criticism, these changes included things such as dividing the first shot into multiple shots, this was achieved through adding different angled shots to further emphasise Steve's tossing and turning. Next, we added short flashes of the dream, during the shots of Steve's restless sleep. This was effective in creating a smoother and more gradual transition into the dream.

      Also, successfully added filters to the shots within the dream sequence, to give a more dream look, this is done through fading the edges of the shots, giving them a dark tinge. And by distorting the image, it assists in creating the surreal and abnormal environment of a dream.